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Drinker's Lecture
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:29:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Yes, go back to your drink,
And well your there, sit and think.
About all the things you'll never see,
And all the things you cannot be.
How about all the time you waste,
Lazing around, just having a "taste".
Or how 'bout the people you'll never meet,
While your tucked up under that sheet.
I want you to know how much the addiction shows,
By your beer belly, and the empty bottle rows.
I want you to know how much harm you inflict,
On your family, by always being ticked.
Do you know how embarrasing it is to us,
When you greet the guests, then start to cuss?
You rule by fear, when you rule at all,
Oh, watch out... and over you fall.
I don't know how you think your in command,
Look now, you just proved you can't even stand.
Don't worry, I know, I'll walk you to bed,
I'll explain tomorrow, tonight it's over your head.
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Re: Drinker's Lecture
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:18:17 AM AEST
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Bless your heart Jamie for being so kind.
There is only one level that you can successfully hand with a drunk.....and that's pity......I'm so sorry that this you have endure.
They are self-destructing as a rule, and could care less about themselves or you as any fool.
They live to drink, and drink some more, always be kind, but don't wait too long to go out the door............and never come back.
This was a well written poem, and you definitely have talent!
Poetic Love
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Re: Drinker's Lecture
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by DragonLuvSong on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:01:37 PM AEST
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| i really like this, it paints a picture in your head, helps everyone to see what you see. |
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Re: Drinker's Lecture
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:16:59 AM AEST
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Ugh. Men!! Thats about all I have to say about that. As a poem, another outstanding write that just shows how big your heart is.
Your sis
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