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Dying To Feel Alive
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:57:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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If a bullet gave life it would take 50 years or more
to reach the end of that barrel.
If a noose brought happiness,
It would replace the tie around your neck
And your open wrist would be a sign of strength
Rather than weakness…
And gasoline would soothe like rain
On the hottest of days
As you set yourself ablaze
Or fill your lounges with water
To drown out all the pain
Electricity would flow with beauty
Throughout your body
And you would never feel more alive
Negativity spawned this positive outreach
Where bliss resides on the sharp end of a knife
Copyright ©
Diatribe
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2004-05-02 19:57:46]
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Re: Dying To Feel Alive
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by dead_beauty on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:34:09 PM AEST
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| Very interesting poem...and original in my opinion. I liked it alot! :)~ravenghost |
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Re: Dying To Feel Alive
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by RedRose on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:08:44 PM AEST
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very different, which is always good well written
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