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Only in my mind
Contributed by
Alessa
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:49:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The blood wil flow
these words will show
I'm full of pain
I have nothing to gain
My cuts run deep
this blood will seep
I see my fear
and hold it near
The razor slices
the knife dices
My fist hits the wall
as I begin to fall
I'm tied to a chair
there's blood in my hair
then I wake up to find
it's only in my mind
Copyright ©
Alessa
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2004-05-02 19:49:14]
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Re: Only in my mind
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:47:31 PM AEST
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wow.. this is really good. I sometimes find myself having some of these things in my mind aswell. Good write
Enjoyed it very much:)
luv ya lots
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: Only in my mind
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by Rylo on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:55:07 PM AEST
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| This was a great read, thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Only in my mind
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by RedRose on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:11:00 PM AEST
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I find myself this way often it odd what you think when your mind wonders- I enjoyed it
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Re: Only in my mind
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:36:26 AM AEST
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| Absoulutly intriguing dear. Reminds me of myself |
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