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quilts of night
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:49:03 PM in AEST
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must we wallow in our own sorrows? or reach out into the world to make a glitterin' bit of light unto another souls place in the world? why are we even here when the earth rotates so slowly that whence we close our eyes it is once again time to open them, blinded by the sun; rubbing sleep away and muttering about another long day of light, when if we try just a bit it may be a lightness of being, a yearning in the heart, a peace in the mind, a warmth smiling in the soul, will we allow it, let it flow through us, or rush back under the covering quilts of night?
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Re: quilts of night
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:59:57 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa you said it so well, when life becomes too much for me to handle....I slide under those quilts of the night! Silence, tranquility, no cares, no goods, just pining away in my own self pity. Used to be I could find a soul to console, or one to help with their load. A small child to guide, and help him to understand. Not so now.....people aren't interested in listening.....and just as a example looked what happened to our dear Jenni Girl....we all loved her so much, she had to step aside for the evil....because she had character, and in the name of peace made so many sacrifices to cover up for this heartless person. I just loved this poem Nessa....it reeks of truth, and marks the times we live in. We better all wake up and watch the sunrise before it's too late!
Marvelous write
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Re: quilts of night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:10:12 PM AEST
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Well, its not too early anymore. Lol this is great hun!
Love 'n hugs
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Re: quilts of night
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:15:48 PM AEST
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While I may prefer the 'quilts of night', I do venture out into the light occasionally. This one time I'm glad I did. It would have been difficult to read this lovely piece in the dark.
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Re: quilts of night
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by Chrissylee on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:34:03 PM AEST
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| lovely write as always Nessa, you rock girl!! If only everyone had such a positive outlook on life the world would be a much better place to live in |
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Re: quilts of night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:06:20 PM AEST
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Just call me 'Sissy Sunshine'. I so love the light of day. Too many menacing creature in the dark. Evil abounds and works under those covers to do the evil deeds to others. Sometimes, as in this instance, they do get found out and detected and it gives us the weapon to defeat them with, called TRUTH. This is not how you meant your beautiful piece of work, but fact is fact and should be recognized. I love your work, Nessa and hope I have not upset you.
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Re: quilts of night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:26:47 PM AEST
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an interesting and philosophical write - you are full of artistic surprises and that's what makes life so interesting - muchly enjoyed this one
hugs
merry
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Re: quilts of night
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:29:28 PM AEST
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| You really said it right in this peice of work well done! I so loved this guilt! Christina |
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Re: quilts of night
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:50:16 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this is perfect. I know exactly what you mean. Hugs to you my dear friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: quilts of night
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 04:38:14 AM AEST
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Thats just beautiful Ness :o) I especially loved that last line.
You've a golden pen !!
Roses
Larry |
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Re: quilts of night
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by blueheart on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:45:24 AM AEST
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| Wow, the timing is perfect. These thoughts were starting to roam in my mind. Great message in this write. |
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Re: quilts of night
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by Thivanka on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:59:00 AM AEST
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Brilliant. Loved each bit of it!
-Thivanka |
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Re: quilts of night
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:38:29 PM AEST
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| this is done very well... i love the way you formatted it... and the descriptiveness you included..... :) |
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Re: quilts of night
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:00:34 AM AEST
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"a peace in the mind, a warmth smiling in the soul, will we allow it, let it flow through us,"..yea, let us allow it..well..this is a nice write Nessa.:-) venkat
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Re: quilts of night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:27:00 AM AEST
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this is a wonderful write, i love the quilts of night concept.
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Re: quilts of night
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:17:43 PM AEST
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Beautiful, short and sweet. Loved it Nessa. Style is very unique. Thank you for sharing this one. Great Write.
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Re: quilts of night
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by arden on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:20:15 PM AEST
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oh this was so lovely nessa.
i loved this.
so perfect.
Arden |
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Re: quilts of night
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:09:38 PM AEST
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Very creative and thought provoking.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: quilts of night
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:53:09 PM AEST
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a ladyfawn speciality...another good 'un.
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Re: quilts of night
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:50:41 PM AEST
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Brilliant write, my friend... Glad I am back here to read your work... Thank You...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: quilts of night
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 11:11:46 AM AEST
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| short but very very sweet, I liked it alot! |
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Re: quilts of night
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:02:32 PM AEST
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What a wonderful write nessa, you words are always inspiring, the style of this write was amazing really drew me into the write and i hear nothing but silence as i read it
Another beautiful piece nessa as always
Luke xx |
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Re: quilts of night
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by Archie on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:53:11 PM AEST
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| Very insiring and challenging poem, as far as I am concerned I want day light. |
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Re: quilts of night
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:15:20 PM AEST
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Whoa, Nessa, hate to be unoriginal :D but this is just beautiful . . . the type of poem you bookmark (just did so) and go back to read again and again and again . . .
Now, sorry, I'd say more, but I have to go reread this :).
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Re: quilts of night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:38:16 PM AEST
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<~~~last to comment again! Forgive me! The page moves soooo quickly now. Nooooooo, I wasn't hiding under my quilt, thank you! :-)
More like under the bed!lol! Just kidding!
Truth from beauty never lies...this is beauty not in disguise!!! Awesome words of truth you speak here!!! Nessa as always...ever clear!
{{{{{{Nessa}}}}}
Angel always...joni |
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Re: quilts of night
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by Soulless on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:51:01 PM AEST
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Another unrolled masterpiece. YOure poetry always has me thinking, I love it.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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