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When We're Alone
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's hard to be alone
Shunned into isolation
Where your own thoughts can drive you insane
A painful reminder of the soul's starvation
Exploring the depths of the soul
Discovering lost ambitions and faded dreams
Reliving painful memories
Left with personal insanity and inside screams
Society left you alone
With thoughts forbidden to another's ear
Overbeared by your own intimacies
Drowning in your unfallen tears
Deprived of everlasting hopes
A soul starved for satisfaction
Keeping untold truths and withheld fears
For fear of an unwanted reaction
Lost dreams, untold fears
Unhappiness is no longer unknown
The soul cries and recieves no answer
When we are alone
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UnfallenTears
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2004-05-02 17:50:12]
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Re: When We're Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 08:19:10 PM AEST
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| excelente. ive got to remember your name. |
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Re: When We're Alone
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by Tanna on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:39:40 PM AEST
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This one packs a punch! Very powerful, very haunting. I liked it!
~T |
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Re: When We're Alone
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 06:20:27 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.....beautifully written... Hauntingly sad..... Love it!!!
Jenni |
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Re: When We're Alone
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by mysticaldancer on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:05:37 PM AEST
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| so this is the poem you got your name out of. it's really good!! |
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Re: When We're Alone
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:31:49 AM AEST
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I fight my worst fights when I fight myself. Well written, I know what youmena.
Take care.
David |
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