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Moving On
Contributed by
diamond_tears
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I dont know how to tell you,
How bad you made me feel.
How can I get through this pain?
How can I begin to heal?
How can I tell you?
How much shame you made me feel.
Even now, 12 years on,
Things are still a big deal.
I hate you, I loathe you.
I despise everything about you.
How I'd love to kill you.
And make you suffer, like I have too.
These scars I have,
To show the internal pain,
To remind me of the memories.
Just exactly what did you gain?
You marked me with your evil.
I thought you had cursed me.
No-one could ever love me.
How could that be?
On that unforgettable day,
The confusion set in.
I was 4 years old.
I felt I belonged in the bin.
I hope you feel guilty,
Like I did for years.
Now I see I was wrong,
Youre not worth my tears.
I am moving on,
Youre still the same.
I will live my life,
You can wallow in shame.
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2004-05-02 17:47:55]
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Re: Moving On
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:05:25 PM AEST
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This Is Sad But Written Really Well !!!!!!!!!
Keep Em Coming :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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Re: Moving On
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:16:39 PM AEST
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I'll glad u got ur feelings out... I can relate to this as u very well know... great job Jo.... I loved it... very emotionally charge write.... thumbs up... way to go... it was not easy to write this I know... great job....
~Donna~ |
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Re: Moving On
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:43:28 AM AEST
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| I can't believe more people haven't commented on this poem.... It is very well written and extremely powerful. Thank you for sharing this - I am very moved by it. I am, regardless of whether the subject matter is light or dark, always appreciative of someone's willingness to "go there". It's good therapy for the poet, I think... and truly, an honor for the reader to have been given a glimpse inside. |
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