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No One Knows
Contributed by
EvaRee
on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:05:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No one knows
anything of my pain
they say they understand
but have never felt the same.
I feel so alone
in this wretched place
everyone thinks i'm okay
because of the smile on my face.
No one knows
if they just look at me
pain, dissappointment, & hate
is what they'd see.
No one knows
no one takes the time
to see how badly
I just want to die.
I badly need someone
to just be here
I look around desperatley
but no one is ever there.
No one knows
how much I cry
no one see's it
they think i'm just fine.
No one knows
they can't see my tears
and no one knowing
is my biggest fear.
Copyright ©
EvaRee
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2004-05-02 17:05:39]
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Re: No One Knows
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by diamond_tears on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:51:55 PM AEST
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wow... this is EXACTLY how I have felt!!!
Well done love this poem!!
take care PM me whenever i will give u support. lots of love jo xxxxx |
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Re: No One Knows
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by lonely_kakashi on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:52:04 PM AEST
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Everyone at one time or another goes through something similar to this, as an example i got cuts on my wrist that most people dont know about (until now :-) ) i wouldn't get too worried about the fact you are hiding things, i know i do and i know other people do, Anyway...
Good poem, great flow, good ryhming,
Oh if you wanna talk PM me :)
:D
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Re: No One Knows
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:37:48 PM AEST
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wow.. this poem is extremely awesome.. wow.. this is exactly everything i've ever been feeling.. its like all my poems put together.. This is so good. I loved how you put it
Awesome job!
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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