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Rejected Rachael.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:58:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A soulless mass of rejection,
Finally turned Rachael into grime and infection.
The helpless child lay forever, in a broken home.
With no one to care, that the child was alone.
And as the years grew, Rachael grew up.
Until the day she rose, and by then she’d had enough.
So she went downstairs, and out the kitchen took a knife,
But at this point, she didn’t take her life.
Instead she went into the lounge, to find her daddy drunk on the floor.
She stabbed him in the head, until he was no more.
Then holding her weapon, she went out on the streets.
The blood dripping off the knife, onto her feet.
She was scard emotionally, but it didn’t stop her,
She’d had enough, of feeling like dirt.
People watched her walking past,
They stopped and stared, like they were in a trance.
She walked to a spot, above the world.
Then her mummy came forth, said Rachael was a bad girl!
But like it bothered Rachael’s head,
She just wanted her mum to see her dead.
So her mum could know how low she was.
So Rachael smiled, and looked at her mum, roz.
Her mummy came closer and screamed aloud.
So Rachael made her mummy proud.
She raised the knife, to near her head.
And quickly, rammed it through her neck.
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Re: Rejected Rachael.
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by monica109 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:19:22 PM AEST
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| This is really good and sad. I can see the raw emotion well! death and destruction powerful! |
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Re: Rejected Rachael.
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:38:14 PM AEST
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| Are you O.K. after that! You have talent , I hope I can see a more positive poem soon. |
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Re: Rejected Rachael.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:19:49 PM AEST
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| This is great! I loved it! Very well done. |
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Re: Rejected Rachael.
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:23:19 PM AEST
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Your Right This Is Really Sad !!!!!!!! But You Have Written It So Well ...... Keep Em Coming
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Rejected Rachael.
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by lonely_kakashi on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:26:59 PM AEST
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very sad poem...guessing its all hyperthetical, well hope it is,
:D
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