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Blind

Contributed by daniel on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

sip the uninscrutable
the liquid mix that is suitable
to fill you top to bottom
make you happy not a problem
i think you look too far for kindness
your serenity is found in blindness
but that's okay for your proximity
even in the bowels of vanity...
i lied.

get your fix
make you feel good everyday, all day
and what you miss
doesn't matter when things go your way...
now what i want and what i need
doesn't mean much to you
but those are now two different things
but now what is that to you?

live in the complicatedness
pay for free at your duress
holding you inside parameters
no chance to contact by letters
what chance have you at understanding
when every moment you are still standing
inside your bubble all by your self
let no one in when you need some help...
i tried.

get your fix
make you feel good everyday, all day
and what you miss
doesn't matter when things go your way...
now what i want and what i need
doesn't mean much to you
but those are now two different things
but now what is that to you?
and what you want and what you need
doesn't mean so much to you
but as you realize these different things
they should mean something to you...

***
(10/03/02)

Copyright © daniel ... [ 2002-10-04 08:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by Damon_Maynard on Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 12:03:20 PM AEST
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Man, still pushing on that personal edge right now, yet somewhat subtlety too. I used to do this a bit, haven't done it for a while though... but I twisted mine just to keep that little bit of blur around them, mainly because I was writing like that for myself... is being almost clear dangerous?

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