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Welcome To Tomorrow
Contributed by
parkman
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Welcome to my twisted mind
Welcome to my unpure thoughts
Meaning is so hard to find
When your brain constantly rots
Welcome to my house of doom
Welcome to the acrid smell
Here it is full of gloom
When you're in this burning hell
Welcome to eternal pain
Welcome to total sorrow
Here we live all insane
For us there is no tomorrow
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-05-02 13:52:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Welcome To Tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 ) by blackmarker on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:23:47 PM AEST (User
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well written.. i love the idea behind this, tomorrow never comes.. awesome. |
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Re: Welcome To Tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:59:13 PM AEST (User
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ooh very good.. the rhyme works really well with this..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Welcome To Tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:51:46 PM AEST (User
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We spend our whole lives waiting for tomorrow and waiting because nothing's good enough. Brilliant write.
Bravo!
Encore!
Love,
Chelsea |
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