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I Can
Contributed by
MisterRight
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Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 08:10:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can erase
Every one of your fears, each of your fallen tears
The doubt, which lies within your heart
And
The uncertainty of the coming years
I can make
Your worries as light as a feather, us the definition of forever
You feel as beautiful as you are
And
A promise to you to always be together
I can give
You passion ever flowing, unconditional love endlessly growing
The relationship you’ve been longing for
And
A reason to keep your smile glowing
I can turn
Back the hands of time, murky waters to sparkling wine
Your wishes into reality
And
A feeling of love, so sublime
I can hold you
And your heart with love that’s true, ever so closely when you are blue
Throughout the lonely nights
And
In my arms with a kiss forever new
I can profess my love
With no more than a sigh, more extreme give you the stars in the sky
By simply saying the words I love you
Or
Without a sound, just the look in my eye
I can promise
To give you a family to adore, I’ll show you what life is for
To be with you through good and bad
And
To love you now and forever more
I can show you
A love you’ve never seen, how it feels to be treated as a queen
The existence of eternal love
And
With me there is no need to dream
I can fulfill
Every desire within your eye, my promises I’ve never lied
Your fantasies with a sense of seduction
And
The hopes of love you often try to hide
I can create
A romance with no end, a real life fairytale no pretend
A future without any regrets
And
A world for us that will heaven transcend
I can offer you
Happiness with each new day, constant affection to sweep you away
My soul to keep comforting yours
And
All the love I possess till we’re old and gray
But I can’t make you
Fall in love with me, give us just one chance to be
Believe we were made for each other
Or
Envision this dream that I can’t help but see
You can make
This dream of mine come true, because all these things I know I can do
But I can’t accomplish a single one
If my life must continue… without you
Copyright ©
MisterRight
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2002-10-04 08:10:00]
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Re: I Can
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 12:44:20 PM AEST
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Some poems are evidently straight from the heart. This is a true example of love and longing mixed together in a tender balance of romance. I especially like the way it places the focus of all your hopes and dreams on the person your affection has brought you to rather than yourself.
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Re: I Can
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by Clarity on
Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 09:11:25 PM AEST
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beautiful writing as always :-) however...although there are a few exceptions -the freakishly smart dude in my calculus class for example (definately not human) - no one just natuarally "gets" discrete math
GO STUDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)
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Re: I Can
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 03:27:55 AM AEST
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Curtis, I absolutely loved this....and was glad you strayed from the Math... This is a fantastic poem.
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Re: I Can
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by ginsdance on
Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 06:14:09 AM AEST
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This was beautiful! I'm glad you ignored your math long enough to do this, but you need to go study Curtis!!! NY schools are harder than TN's... lol. I loved this...! And I whole heartedly agree with this. You can't make the heart love somebody, and when it falls you can't get it back... A hard lesson to learn, but worth it just the same! Great write Curtis!
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