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Remember the voices
Contributed by
falloftheangels
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:00:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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In the well-worn path inside these halls,
Whispers.
Our anguish stained onto gratified walls,
Voices.
Anarchy scratched into bathroom stalls,
Screams.
And all around me people fall,
Echoes,
Still ringing in my ear.
Remember
their voices.
There is a reason why they're gone.
While the truth may not set you free, it will show you the chains.
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falloftheangels
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2004-05-02 11:00:26]
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Re: Remember the voices
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by morelikelyrics on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:16:17 AM AEST
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wow... quite eye-opening...
"While the truth may not set you free, it will show you the chains."
its been a while since i have read such meaning words... I believe you have much talent, and I wait for more of your wonderful writes... keep it up
~Morelikelyrics
"Ideas they wash you while beliefs they stain
If the current gets too peaceful you can count on the waves again" |
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Re: Remember the voices
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:15:57 PM AEST
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wow! i love this one too. it captures the real truth behind, the brighter sides of school. i too hears things, but only sometimes. and things boom for me alot as well.
but i think this is fantastic!!!
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Re: Remember the voices
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:18:14 PM AEST
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| Holy cow is that last line a piece of well-crafted, insightful wisdom! Especially powerful after the strength of the poem. Nicely done! |
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Re: Remember the voices
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by arden on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:25:31 PM AEST
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wow powerful. this was amazingly written.
i loved this. well done.
Arden |
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