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The Day Of Death
Contributed by
Delusions
on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cut the flesh
Cut it deep
Watch the crimson oil seep
Feel the pain
Melt away
Dream no more
For a better day
Body numb
Face is white
The Day of Death
Now in sight.....
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Delusions
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2002-10-03 23:30:00]
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by aernby on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 11:40:23 PM AEST
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| This is a dark one -- good write |
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by Daniel on
Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 04:23:22 AM AEST
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it sounds like those old black and white horror movies, the narrating creepy voice in the background as the blood curling scream of the damsel in distress arises... okay, i haven't been watching too much tv, HONEST! he he... GOOD WRITING HERE!! kudos! ;0)
-daniel |
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by Sonibe on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 12:38:26 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem....keep up the good work.... |
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 06:47:34 AM AEST
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i can really relate to this.. thx for sharing it :)
im guessing we'd get along actually lol
gem xXx |
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by adsalamon on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 05:47:53 AM AEST
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| nice one. ive done some very similar to this...... |
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:58:48 AM AEST
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| a very good but sad poem, great work. |
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:28:24 PM AEST
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| awesome... |
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by unforgiven on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:25:02 AM AEST
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so short and yet so full of strong emotion and so compelling. this poem is one of my favourites after readin all of them tonight haha. i commented on them all so don't blame me if some sound like the others lol. ur one of my greatest inspirations and my muse....thank u sweety.
mwa
becca ~xoxo~ |
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Re: The Day Of Death
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 08:16:34 AM AEST
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I remember reading and commenting on this a long while ago,
reading it again, and it was like the first time
5 out of 5 |
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