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Final Peace
Contributed by
PhantomGate666
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:03:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am observing and conserving all my feelings in this place
Feel so hollow, full of sorrow, can't you see it in my face?
Constant trying, slowly dying, I will leave without a trace
One last sigh, say goodbye, I will fall away with grace...
My dreams forsaken, soul is taken, I await expectedly
My fate engraved, the road is paved, I embrace it willingly
I surrender, peace so tender, I accept it fearlessly
The end inevitable, expectations incredible, giving up eagerly...
Heartbeat is fading, endless sleep is waiting, coming oh so fast
Quickly going, no controlling, everything is past
Finally smiling, no tears, no crying, sweet happiness at last
There's no explaining, no complaining, my emotions are so vast...
Memories are rotten, pain is forgotten, life is deserted.
Copyright ©
PhantomGate666
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2004-05-02 02:03:35]
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Re: Final Peace
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:52:39 AM AEST
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| well written poem, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Final Peace
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:47:39 AM AEST
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I have had far too many of those days, but only on the days that end in Y...
Very appreciable theme, nicely conveyed. The rhymes are fluid, and the rhythm does not falter much. A very solid piece, very enjoyable read.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Final Peace
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by Beautifully-Imperfect on
Wednesday, 1st September 2010 @ 12:23:35 AM AEST
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| Lovely Poem hun |
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