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:o( The Lonely Soldier )o:
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:09:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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He roams the war torn country
with his gun in his hand,
shots ring out and
he finds somewhere to take cover.
His comrades are elsewhere
fighting off snipers
upon rooftops of nearby buildings.
The shooting has stopped,
the war has taken
its toll on the lonely soldier,
he sits upon a rock
and sets his gun and helmut
on the ground beside him.
He holds his head
in his hands and cries,
his heart longs to go home.
Home away from all the death
that has surrounded him.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.30/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-05-01 21:09:32]
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Re: :o( The Lonely Soldier )o:
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:38:54 PM AEST
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Very sad but so true.
MY heart breaks for all that have given up their life so that we can be free.
Great job.
luv, huggs, peace, hope,
emy |
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Re: :o( The Lonely Soldier )o:
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:37:14 PM AEST
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| so much solitude... sadness reflected in our times, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: :o( The Lonely Soldier )o:
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:56:14 AM AEST
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I HATE WAR! I FEEL SO SORRY FOR ALL THOSE SOLDIERS OVER THERE & GIVE THEM MY BLESSING!! NICE POEM CYNTHIA
THANKS FOR WRITING IT!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: :o( The Lonely Soldier )o:
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:11:51 AM AEST
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Sis This Is Really Sad But So Very True
My Heart Cries Out For The Ones That Lost There Lifes Fighting For Us !!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank You For Sharing This Heartfelt Poem About Our Soldiers At War !!!!!!!!!!
Love,Hugs And Peace God Bless :-)
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: :o( The Lonely Soldier )o:
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by arden on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:12:48 AM AEST
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such sadness.
filled with emotion.
a truely great write my friend.
you captured the feel wonderfully.
i loved this.
Arden |
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Re: :o( The Lonely Soldier )o:
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by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:19:47 AM AEST
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made me cry you captured the lonliness so well
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