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Without Love
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:43:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wanna sing my heart out
I can't seem to find a way to cure
the sadness I feel
In a heartbreaking voice
the gloomness fills the room
Guess nothing was real
I can't take another disappointment
Or a word uttered in a rage
but not meant
How did I know
I couldn't let you go to the place you went
I've never felt so little
with trouble whispering it's her time
I have to face it alone
since I can't anymore
consider you're mine
I've ran out of excuses
not to believe how pathetic I am
without love
what is left for me to do then
But to hold tight the last breath
and the fading scent of your sweet lie
I have yet to come to terms
with how fast you passed me by
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
... [
2004-05-01 20:43:50]
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Re: Without Love
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:00:23 PM AEST
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this is beautifully sad, i do believe we are in the same mood with love, keep 'em coming:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Without Love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:01:48 PM AEST
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Strong, sad but very good writing.
luv, huggs, hope,
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Re: Without Love
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by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:26:04 AM AEST
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soooooooo sad if he is going to be this way to you then he doesnt deserve the sweetness in your heart I know its hard but there are roses and rainbows awaiting you dont ever lose hope and never release your dreams............
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