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The Guide
Contributed by
Crow
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:32:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why did you leave it
to hands unsure as yours.
We sat covered with the blanket of father and son.
I had talked the words you will take to eternity, you answering in rhyme to leave me search.
Father forgive me,
and I will you
as we laughed through the tears.
Sit with me this is all you will need, a father to the son.
Weathered and drawn from my time in this world,
now from my hands to yours.
That moment is all that counted,
in two lives once shared.
I stand true to your hands that guided
as your bones bleach white....Crow
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Crow
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2004-05-01 20:32:02]
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Re: The Guide
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by 2ndChance on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:39:55 PM AEST
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| Very well writen, the stanzas are meaningful. I am sorry for your loss... |
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Re: The Guide
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by shelby on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:48:50 PM AEST
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beautiful...........
Michelle |
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