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For The Moment
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:04:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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For The Moment
she speaks
and all is silent
for the moment
he is stunned
her silence at first
merely an imposition
soon he will be
at her command
for his accusations
drive her inward
not understanding
he carries om
have you no heart
no kind words to impart
she has him
at her fingertips
her silence unbearable
to him now still
his words can not
touch her for
she has seen to it
he can not penetrate
the shield of her silence
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faithmairee
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2004-05-01 18:04:54]
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Re: For The Moment
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:13:41 PM AEST
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Isn't it amazing and mind blowing to look at something and get inspired to write something beautiful? I think so.
Natural talent is a blessing and you have it.
I liked this one alot.
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Re: For The Moment
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:52:34 PM AEST
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i love this, faith, especially the ending, its so strong:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: For The Moment
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:29:38 PM AEST
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This is a really strong write. What a beautiful inspiration to pull from.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: For The Moment
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:14:24 PM AEST
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I Like This Alot !!!!! Very Strong Write And Written So Well !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep Em Coming !!
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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