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Blue is the colour
Contributed by
reilt
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:46:15 PM in AEST
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Blue boy,
Got me good.
It's just a little of this
And more of another
In me.
He's got the weakness,
Turn the heat down
By the bye.
I shudder when I think,
But I let him in
To sin against,
So lay the fault again.
Lines are crossed
Where he's drawn.
Blue boy,
Shade every mood
I've ever known,
Got me where
I wasn't going,
Caught me when
I wasn't looking.
Lucky love
Or wasted journey?
When boy meets girl
And falls asunder under
His spell...?
Blue is the colour
Neath my skin.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-05-01 17:46:15]
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Re: Blue is the colour
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:52:24 PM AEST
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Some loves are like that. I really like this. I like the way it describes that connection--the oneness. Nice stuff.
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Re: Blue is the colour
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by reilt on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:57:47 PM AEST
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oooops....i t's meant to read
WHEN GIRL MEETS BOY...
but i put it the other way round by mistake!!!
thanks a million for reading...gra...dee*
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Re: Blue is the colour
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:01:35 PM AEST
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I think I could ramble endlessly about the color blue. So many times i've felt the same way.
I certainly could relate to this one.
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Re: Blue is the colour
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by Crys on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:12:55 PM AEST
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Everyone takes to a poem differently, and I see this as a play on the line "Love is Blind". You know it's bad and it shouldn't be done, but you follow your heart instead of you head. Wonderful write. Emotional indeed.
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Re: Blue is the colour
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:20:57 PM AEST
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| This poem flows wonderfully! I really like this one. |
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Re: Blue is the colour
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:32:44 PM AEST
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| well written with a touch of the bittersweet:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Blue is the colour
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by New_York_Chick on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:47:38 PM AEST
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