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My Escape
Contributed by
crys
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 04:44:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Shades of gray,
Paint the world,
As I find my escape.
Crawl in bed,
Close my eyes,
Let it melt away.
Sleep all day,
Sleep all night,
It doesn't seem right.
The dreams come,
They swallow me whole.
Reality far from sight.
My release,
Abandoning the burdens,
Depressions cease.
For a few hours,
Enjoying life.
Away from all the strife.
Then I wake,
And I cry,
Bidding Good bye.
To the dream,
Lovely dream
That was my retreat.
I'm awake,
And I see,
It just can't be.
But it's true,
Though not fair,
My life's the nightmare..........
Copyright ©
crys
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2004-05-01 16:44:28]
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Re: My Escape
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by dark_angel_of_poetry on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:31:24 PM AEST
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| Wonderful! Highest compliments. That was great! Brings up some good points too. I write songs and if you don't mind I would love to use your ideas as a song if that would be alright. Either way, great poem and I encourage you to keep writing. |
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Re: My Escape
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:44:52 PM AEST
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WOWW.....This poem hit reality, thought it was awesome, very powerful
Blessings
HOPE4ME2 |
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Re: My Escape
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by reilt on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:51:04 PM AEST
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| wow what an amazing poem. it really struck a chord with me. wonderfully and honestly written. |
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Re: My Escape
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by Butterat_Zool on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:37:39 AM AEST
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| I've always been amazed by the idea of escapism, and i used to love napping as a way to get rid of stress and bring peace to a hard day... Keep exploring this idead of sleeping, and there's no telling what kind of powerful emotions and ideas you'll find. Keep up the good work. Butterat Zool. |
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