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Left Behind
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:05:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like I am sinking
Even though I am yelling
Yelling for help but no help comes
Oh no! What have I become?
A fake!
A fraud!
I no longer have the strength to continue
The boat has left
Left me standing on the dock
The waves of the mockers
The screams of those left behind
Where was I at boarding time?
How did I get left behind?
Oh someone please help me
I want to go on the boat
But the boat I can’t find
Please someone help me
I am drowning
What I want who I am
I know not
But I do know this
I NEED your help
January 14th 2000
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lil_angel
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2004-05-01 15:05:27]
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Re: Left Behind
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:21:20 AM AEST
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Good write lil angel... :)
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Re: Left Behind
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by Juliet on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 02:17:31 PM AEST
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| Nice job. I fell like this too often. |
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Re: Left Behind
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by princess8383 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:08:59 AM AEST
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| I felt this way many times when I was younger, great job. |
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