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My Illegible Letter
Contributed by
Diatribe
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:54:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wrote you a letter
Originally a crimson color
But it turned black as it dried
Then for some reason I died
But it’s alright
I’ve been brought back to life
I guess I should think twice
About my source of ink next time
I’ve been picking up the scattered belongings
You’ve left behind from your scurry
I think I’ll put them in a box
My forget you nots’
Something to look at when I’m drunk
And beat myself up over day after day
Until I find someone to replace
Do you think it’ll be that easy?
I sure do hope so…
I once described you as my Juliet
But now you’re just the poison
And it’s too bad you’re not dead
It’s amazing how much I miss you
Do you think we can be friends?
Copyright ©
Diatribe
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2004-05-01 13:54:22]
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Re: My Illegible Letter
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:56:52 PM AEST
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| oh wow...this is full of much emotion, and i know exactly how it is to be here...im actually...kind of in this spot right now....this really appealed to me, great job here |
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Re: My Illegible Letter
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:25:17 PM AEST
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This one touched my heart.
So much emotion and heart in this one.
From the title, past the opening and to the ending this was a joy to read.
You have alot of talent.
Kie |
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Re: My Illegible Letter
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by TaintedOptomist on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:17:00 PM AEST
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| great work. i loved the juliet line. beautiful ending and do i detect some sarchasm in the last line? |
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