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Trick Or Treat
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She was so perfect, such a beautiful sight
When she got ready, for her work at night
Her boss took care of her, also his cut
If she never made it, she would just get hurt
She would stand alone, watching the cars
Smiling invitingly, displaying her wares
Looking for a trick, to earn her some cash
A pitiful life, sorrowful and harsh
She started the game, at only fourteen
Introduced by her father, he named her the queen
He needed some money, to pay off his debt
She was his way out, he showed no regret
Now he has gone, she still plays the game
Never knowing any better, her life remained the same
Every night working, her ass on the street
Whispering to passers by, hey there, trick or treat
She whispered to one man, she'll whisper no more
He whispered I despise you, cheap little whore
Her neck he slit open, with a razor sharp knife
No more games will she play, no more pitiful life
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Re: Trick Or Treat
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 02:54:06 PM AEST
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| WOW! You discribed this very well! You are a great author! Good job! |
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Re: Trick Or Treat
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:43:40 PM AEST
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| It's such an eerie write, I love it! The stroy depicted in it is quite real and consequential. |
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