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Blood By My Blade.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:26:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I’m so tired.
I need to sleep!
It’s made me so weary,
My blood continues to seep.
My skin is open,
It was pieced by my blade.
It had to be done,
The darkness wouldn’t fade.
Don’t say I was wrong!
To release some pain.
How else would it go?
I didn’t want it to stay!!
It had to come out!
If that’s so wrong,
Would you rather I killed my-self?
From pain being here so long??
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deathdrop
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2004-05-01 13:26:39]
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Re: Blood By My Blade.
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 02:40:52 PM AEST
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| This is a good write, i hope things look up for you. |
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Re: Blood By My Blade.
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:38:34 PM AEST
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You have captured pure, raw emotion. A write that allowed this readers heart to melt.
Blessings
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Re: Blood By My Blade.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:46:30 AM AEST
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this poem is really deep.al night i have been looking for a really good poem that speaks to me and i think this is it. im sorry for anything bad in your life.
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