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In Flames
Contributed by
NirvanaLotus
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:59:38 PM in AEST
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as I watch your life go up in flames
you'll swear up and down you'd like to change
but when the sun sinks slowly into the sky now you're right where you started again
with nothing to say,
without an argument or case
and when it's said and done and done and said
and now what's another day?
I can feel these changes right before my eyes
I see a dying fire inside your eyes
when will you stop and realize the worth and value of your life?
as you suffocate yourself within this mindless 9-5 wake up!
there's more!
and your life is nobody's but yours
and now its said and done and done and said
and now what's another day?
you're running circles around my slow pace
you've reached the finish line only to realize there was no race
I'm sick of being stepped on for the things I choose
I give and take and now I've taken all I could
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2004-05-01 12:59:38]
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Re: In Flames
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by bernard on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:11:40 PM AEST
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Good write, emotionaly strong.
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Re: In Flames
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:51:05 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
I especially like the last paragraph.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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