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Shockwaves
Contributed by
merry
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:17:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Shock waves rocked my heart
Trying to restart the clicking
Restrained so long behind bars
We were framed and them accused
Falling head over heels in love
Couldn’t stop if we wanted to
Your disappearance came as a surprise
Desperately inaccurate accounts
Hit the papers with tainted stories
Bite my lip and say I’m sorry
Or are you at the bottom of the ocean
Beyond my hearing, staring up at the sun
While I wait on pins and needles
Not daring to move or blink
I will not waiver or change my story
Harden my heart and keep on going
Copyright ©
merry
... [
2004-05-01 12:17:29]
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Re: Shockwaves
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:29:50 PM AEST
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This had a mysterious quality to it.
It was very pleasant to read and done with your touch for making words come alive.
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Re: Shockwaves
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:18:20 AM AEST
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ohhh so full of feeling and beautifully written, shows accepting of come what may, so sad though, and your title, wow, exact pangs that the heart goes through....... big hugs, love nessa
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Re: Shockwaves
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:08:25 AM AEST
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Brought back the sick feeling I once felt in my stomach for three straight days. Don't really want to go there again. Love affairs are so melancholy. Another expressive write.
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