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Success
Contributed by
bhav
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 11:27:50 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Where does one go after becoming successful in life?
The ways to go are many,
but can’t help noticing that success tends to make you cautious in life.
Risks and skill together combine to make you successful,
but risks are avoided after one becomes successful.
Taking risks should be like that of an human urge to eat,
one eats because one wants to and has to eat.
After becoming successful one has to realize that one has just added another comma,
success stays with those who don’t believe in full stops but in commas.
Been successful comes with a price,
agreed nothing comes for free,
one has to pay a price.
Success for me is a long and some times a lonely journey on path, which few tread,
I know I will succeed with many commas in my life and with
lots of hard work I will create a path on which everyone will tread.
Copyright ©
bhav
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2004-05-01 11:27:50]
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Re: Success
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:40:18 PM AEST
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Alot of wisdom and deep thought in this poem.
I think like this at times as well.
Enjoyed this one immensely.
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Re: Success
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by bhav on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:19:25 PM AEST
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Kie...
Thanks for reading and liking my poem...Bhav |
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