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A Mouse

Contributed by Rhei76 on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 11:08:54 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

A mouse not a rat. Took his bag and walked
Past all the traps. His urges were great but
He was stoned. So he saved all the roaches
And kept them in his hat. He made it to the
Front door, turned and said goodbye.
A tear fell but he felt not a thing.
Someone cried but he was stoned. hearing
Nothing, he ventured outside. a bright light
Filled his eyes as he stepped into the sun.
He says aloud "no longer do I need to
Hide." He felt his eyes open to find the
Answers to the questions he had always
Asked. He says "I am on my way to greater Things."
Then out of the sun his eyes lock on to
Eyes coming out of the bright light. he
Says "how convienent," when the claws of a
Tired hawk reached down and he says
"answers, hell, at least i'm stoned..."

Copyright ©2004 Eric/Feanics Pulido/Kye

Copyright © Rhei76 ... [ 2004-05-01 11:08:54]
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Re: A Mouse (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:47:11 PM AEST
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I thought this was cute in a dark sarcastic sort of way. Which I like because I suffer from dry humor.

I pictured the whole thing in my mind and really enjoyed reading this.

Kie

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