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My Angel Gave Me Wings
Contributed by
Rhei76
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:39:09 AM in AEST
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My angel gave me wings
So I could fly in the sanctuary of my hell
My angel gave me a kiss
And sent me on my way
She said
"I hope you like your hell
It's where the dead live"
I opened my eyes
And said I am in hell
Just then I awoke
As a voice echoed in my head
You are home where the dead walk
I walk over to my window
And opened the blinds
The world looked just the same
Like before
As I thought I'm in hell
I'm in hell
by:Eric Pulido
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2004-05-01 10:39:09]
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Re: My Angel Gave Me Wings
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by bernard on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 11:09:34 AM AEST
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If this is really the way you are thinking then I can only say S N A P out of it. It's not such a bad world after all, it is the inhabitants that make it seem worse than it is.
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Re: My Angel Gave Me Wings
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:44:26 PM AEST
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The title was excellent.
The poem was one, that all of us can relate too.
I've been in heartbreaks hell and it is a miserable lonely place to be.
This is a great poem.
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Re: My Angel Gave Me Wings
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:38:31 PM AEST
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Very interesting write for an 8 year old.
Sounds to me like religion scarred the hell out of u.
Many of them, (not all) use scare tactics to so called get us sinners saved. We'll always be sinners here.
Great job for an 8 year old.
luv, huggs,
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