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Anemonefish
Contributed by
Stitch
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:20:58 AM in AEST
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The fish of the underwater anemone
has no effect on me.
For on the inside
it is nothing but a butterfly
fluttering by.
Copyright ©
Stitch
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2004-05-01 07:20:58]
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Re: Anemonefish
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:24:30 AM AEST
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very simple and sweet my friend
really good work |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:29:12 AM AEST
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| cute. I like it. |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by JennyFruFru on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:24:14 AM AEST
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| awwww this is the cutest poem ever... :) :) :) |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by 2ndChance on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:54:38 AM AEST
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| wow. I love the comparison between the fish and the butterfly...there was no way I would ever be able to spell anemone...good job on that one... |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:11:34 PM AEST
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very nice lill sunshine, tell mommy to let you open your own account, your poetry can stand on its own two feet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Anemonefish
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by ksprincess42004 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:00:33 PM AEST
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| cute, reminds me of Finding Nemo |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:53:55 PM AEST
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Well this certainly was deep and full of imagination.
I wonder what color the butterfly would be? Perhaps shades of yellows or autumn flutters?
You write well and I look forward to your next one Sunshine.
Kie |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:56:39 PM AEST
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You are so talented. Tell Mommie you have your own fan club now.
Rita |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:40:33 AM AEST
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yeah! I agree with Ness! Don't let Mom steal your lime light kiddo, this is a great little poem. If she doesnt get you your own account I think you should pinch her....(it's ok tell her Larry said you could ) ;o)
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:40:09 PM AEST
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| Very cute! |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:41:42 PM AEST
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Almost in Haiku form (did I spell that right lol)
Very insightful and deep in its simplicity.
Claps and claps!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Anemonefish
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:31:59 PM AEST
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| Very simple and fluttery. I wonder does its sting hurt |
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