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The loss
Contributed by
ravenrain
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:36:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You went away everytime
I needed you the most.
You broke my heart everytime
I told you I loved you.
Everytime I look in your eyes
You turn away from me.
Why do you hide?
You run away from everything
I can't keep up.
Your eyes tell me everything
I don't know what to do.
Everything I think of you
You make me think twice.
Why do you hide?
Somethings were meant to be
even us...
as messed up as it seems.
Someday we'll succeed.
We'll find the time to spend together.
We'll find the things we love about each other.
Copyright ©
ravenrain
... [
2004-05-01 00:36:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The loss
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueeyedevil13 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:05:16 AM AEST (User
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Somethings were meant to be
even us...
as messed up as it seems.
Someday we'll succeed.
this is a really good stanza. i hope you do succeed. it was a good write. i felt your pain of losing someone you love.
keep writing ^-^
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