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The Shining
Contributed by
essentially9
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:52:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The Shining
The true sun shines through
The ever submitting moon
The far away stars
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2004-04-30 22:52:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Shining
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:46:30 AM AEST (User
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good.
what more can I say,
except keep writing this way
joy springs from your pen |
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Re: The Shining
(User Rating: 1 ) by ThePumpkinKing on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:40:29 PM AEST (User
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i like hailku poetry...short and sweet...and forces you to compact your thoughts, great job |
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