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A Skewed Sense of Betrayal

Contributed by Butterat_Zool on Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Such a strong word
to fall from the lips
of such a weak person.
To even begin to understand,
you need building blocks
which just aren't there.
Trust, namely, is the most important one.
You swear to trust,
and yet, you don't.
Trust me above all others,
Cain said to Abel,
or Abel to Cain,
I really don't know which
killed his brother
in cold blood.
That's not important.
That's not my arguement,
and you know what I mean.
You say you can't trust the body
to which you entrusted your honor.
Logic follows.
You yourself cannot trust your honor.
By that, it seems that you
must not have any.
Honor, that is, in case you were too busy cursing me
to pay any attention to my words.
If you don't have honor,
but you swore upon it,
then what you swore means nothing to you.
By that, I, and the rest of my friends
also mean nothing to you.
Therefore, it is with a sad air,
that I proclaim you a man
devoid of the virtue of honor,
and thus, infinitely lower than myself.
It is my viewpoint that you can never be trusted again,
for any reason,
in any circumstance,
until the end of time.

Copyright © Butterat_Zool ... [ 2002-10-03 09:30:00]
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Re: A Skewed Sense of Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by Crys on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 02:03:07 AM AEST
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Very strong words here. Intensity drips from these words as they are spoken and pools at the feet. You have strong morals, I've found from your work, and very deep logic. I like how you think, you're a very clever man. Once more, great write!

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