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Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 06:11:03 PM in AEST
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Everything I say goes unheard by you.
Are my screams not loud enough to penetrate your sheild?
Your every molecule rejects touch to reality.
Do you never leave your cotton-lined dream world?
Afraid of the knife, though im-penetrating, you never leave your base.
Do your eyes only see crimson death away from your icy abyss?
Not all life is ended so even when the chance is there.
Stay in your box, epicene soul.
You are not bold enough to breate.
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2004-04-30 18:11:03]
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Re: You
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:10:00 PM AEST
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| Very well done! This is really good you got a great talent! |
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Re: You
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by OMEGA_ on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:40:12 PM AEST
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Wow Really Amazing
What a wonderful use of words
well done |
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Re: You
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:54:32 PM AEST
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| thanks! |
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