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memory
Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:20:44 PM in AEST
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you wanted a lover you didn't have to love but that dream fades with your crimson regret. i'm gone now and you can't change what you did so you'll slit your wrists and i won't stop you. you expect me to come to your rescue but my only membrance of you is hidden from all concious veiw. i won't comeback and you know i'm gone. i won't shed a tear, to me you're already dead. if i didn't cry then, why would i cry now? i'm perfect and you brought me into your mortality. you didn't even ask my consent. did you know how i'd reply? if you want to leave the world you might as well just do it now: otherwise i'll just erase myself from your dreams. you're left with this ache. it's me that haunts your
memory.
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Re: memory
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by crystalnebulina on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 06:38:37 PM AEST
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very well written, thank you for sharing
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Re: memory
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 06:52:31 PM AEST
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This poem definitely shows anger and hatred. I admire your use of words to get such passion on paper. (or screen for that matter). Strong poem.
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