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HiTTiNG THe RoCKS aT THe BoTToM
Contributed by
xslashxprettyxskinx
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:14:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Who is going to want me?
A Shallowed hand reaches from the grave to mine
No more silver on clouds without sunshine
When latent behavior is less then heavenly devine
Who is going to want a worthless patchwork doll less then fine?
Who is going to need me?
Forgotten once the faces leave your direct view
Never apologetic when a punishments due
The greed of it all plagues me as being so new
Who is going to need someone not willing to give a few?
Who is going to love me?
Love is the smallest living and writtne damnation
An evil aura for lack of human creation
Some kind of beautiful letdown invitation
Who is going to love a lifelong blood feasting infestation?
So much beats and bludgeons my thoughts
When all hope is gone and faith is lost!
All I need is a pilar to hold me up
Someones pathetic strength and silence isn't enough.
This is the end of my painful story
With eternal hatred I pass without glory.
Find me some place better on the other side
Some place magical where I wont have to hide!
Copyright ©
xslashxprettyxskinx
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2004-04-30 17:14:22]
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Re: HiTTiNG THe RoCKS aT THe BoTToM
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by OMEGA_ on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:18:49 PM AEST
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Lindsy that was amazing really enjoying piece
you really deserve having all of those fans
i hope you enjoy us with more my lil sweet friend |
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Re: HiTTiNG THe RoCKS aT THe BoTToM
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:48:15 AM AEST
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Oh my god! You captured exactly the way I feel, to the letter. This is beyond anything as simple as beautiful...it is pure emotion, that strikes a deep and resounding chord with me.
Truly,
-Dan |
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