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Discovered
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:26:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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His solmen eyes avoid me.
His skin does not touch mine.
I feel numbness take me,
Wrapping round me like a vine.
He doesnt really see me.
He wont admit im there.
And then i come to believe,
That he really doesnt care.
Our eyes meet, one last time,
Before itll be goodbye.
His face asks the unanswered question...
...Why?
Why did this happen?
How did it come to be?
He didnt understand,
And i couldnt make him see.
And in the end...
He turns around,
walks away,
And exits from my world.
[.:.im sorry.:.]
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2004-04-30 16:26:35]
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Re: Discovered
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by Diatribe on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:28:55 PM AEST
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Re: Discovered
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 01:12:18 PM AEST
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another great one, im liking you
this style is great
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Re: Discovered
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 01:12:19 PM AEST
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another great one, im liking you
this style is great
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