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Random-ness!
Contributed by
hawaii06
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:20:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Joy; love; lust
Up on the hill waiting;
never finding new things,
Jus' the same ol', same ol' nonsense
Trying to do new things;
Never comprehending;
Dirty; nasty; crummy;
where does the grime and gore come from?
Trash every which way you turn,
Streets filled with filth and the air with polution
slimy; slippery; wet
My life sliding through my fingers
With the blink of an eye,
Your changing age,
Growing older, and most growing wiser.
Maturity; Integrity; Honesty
You learn these as life goes on
Hopefully at a young age, maybe not
Hate; Racism; Horror
Never knowing what to expect when you turn around!
LIFE GOES BY WITH THE BLINK OF AN EYE!
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hawaii06
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2004-04-30 15:20:40]
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Re: Random-ness!
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by Kirby on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:58:07 PM AEST
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| This is random but a good write anyways. I loved the last stanza...or really the last two sentences. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Random-ness!
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by Diatribe on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:02:33 PM AEST
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| this is a pretty short, yet true summary of life i feel. from love and/or lust to the slow deterioration of our planet (polution) to growing old and wise (maturing) to hate... and especially "never knowing what to expect when you turn around" ... i know there's a LOT more to life than these things, but these are things we have to deal with day in and day out... excellent read! |
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Re: Random-ness!
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:28:20 PM AEST
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| One of the most excellent poems you wrote for sure! I like this alot, very wise and sensible....... |
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