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You're never coming back
Contributed by
cheech
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:58:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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cry and crying myself to sleep
everynight,with the thoughts that fill my head
i think i'm in way to deep
i feel so dead
the day will come
when i'll meet you there
no one realizes how much
i miss you
i need you here,but you're there
you're never coming back
even though i need you here
before you left,you should have
been told all of my thoughts,
i really need you,i'll meet
you there,but i want you here
go no more,i'll meet you there
but you should know i need you here
i don't think you seemed to realize i care
i need you here,but you're there
you're never coming back
even though i need you here
(repeat 2x)
if you were here
you'd be so proud
but i know you are
you are on that cloud
watching over us
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cheech
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2004-04-30 14:58:16]
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Re: You're never coming back
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:11:43 PM AEST
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| Very good job! This is a good poem! |
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Re: You're never coming back
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by Kirby on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:03:11 PM AEST
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| This is such a great poem and the last stanza almost made me cry because it just shook me and i wasn't expecting that. I love this write. Great job. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: You're never coming back
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by SeanMcHaney on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:41:15 AM AEST
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| Touching, very much so. |
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