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Why A Boy, Why A Man
Contributed by
Blu
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:35:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why a boy snuck out that night
climbing into the front seat
of a black T-Bird
losing his virginity
among the smell of beer, a water bed and porn.
Why a boy why a man laid there
covered by the body of his lover
knowing those moments were stolen in secret
in a bed that wasn't his
Why a man why a boy followed blindly
submitting to why a man would describe him
with whatever adjective rolled off his drunken tongue
Why a man would lay with a boy
why a boy would allow it, laughing
in the face of a god he cared nothing for
sneaking carnal kisses here and here
Why a man why a boy drank
coming to with a nameless face in his bed
lips cracked and dry, head pounding
sheets stained
oh god, was it safe?
Why a boy why a man moved
flying over land to that far away peninsula
searching for answers
finding them on the dance floor
tongue swelling in a man's mouth
discovering truths in a man's bed
Why a boy why a man
came back
seduced by another city
sprawling life and cement
no thoughts of the black T-Bird
And now I undestand
why a boy why a man
Copyright ©
Blu
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2004-04-30 14:35:16]
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Re: Why A Boy, Why A Man
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by Kayan on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:39:37 PM AEST
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Your words leave me breathless. Grotesque yet erotic. Such a sense of reality and truth. Very well done
Peace,
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Re: Why A Boy, Why A Man
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by ksprincess42004 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:45:13 PM AEST
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| This was really beautiful. great job! |
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Re: Why A Boy, Why A Man
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:57:10 PM AEST
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| Man that's messed up. I like it alot, honestly. Your style reminds me of someone I know. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Why A Boy, Why A Man
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:31:36 PM AEST
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| it made me feel sick to read this. but it is good that some one has written about it. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Why A Boy, Why A Man
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by SeanMcHaney on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:21:02 AM AEST
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| I like it well written |
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