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Rain
Contributed by
Ramfire
on
Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 06:34:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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This rain that touches plains and field is kind;
it makes all living greens to thrive and grow.
Abiding creatures wait in homes, don't mind;
a little wetness cleans their trails some know.
Fresh rain brings sweet aroma, sky's aglow;
spring flowers surely glisten, lives abound.
Clouds gray then seen, were laid afore set low;
thus showers keep our feathered tribes aground.
Half-circle bow, your colors' bright around;
such beauty holds our eyes upon your sight.
Your perfect shape and hues, how they astound;
all so soon they now take themselves to flight.
Cool rain, such benediction, soften heat;
parched weary glebe applauds your noble feat!
Copyright ©
Ramfire
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2002-07-15 06:34:03]
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Re: Rain
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 08:49:00 PM AEST
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very nice , i like this one, nice flow.
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Re: Rain
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by Ramfire on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 11:03:38 AM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words. Thank you for your good score.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Rain
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 12:40:11 PM AEST
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full of poise. i like. the way you expressed this is very good. seems so peaceful and full of harmony.
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Re: Rain
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:13:27 PM AEST
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Thanks for your very kind words. Maybe I can write something else you'll like. I hope so.
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