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All alone
Contributed by
Tonilovesadam
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:22:10 PM in AEST
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It is so hard as I walk through the world alone
I'm like a broke down car at Auto Zone...
Waiting to be fixed but I think nobody really knows how
My best friend has a boyfriend now
And that is all she wants to do
is spend time with him and her new friend to
She hangs out with me no more
With her gone my heart is so sore.
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2004-04-30 13:22:10]
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Re: All alone
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:59:25 PM AEST
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| Very good! Short and to its point! Excellent Work! |
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Re: All alone
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by ksprincess42004 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:20:06 PM AEST
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| it is really heartbreaking when you find yourself growing apart from a close friend. I hope this works out. Awesome job! |
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