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HOOKER: part II
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:20:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i am lost in this world
of sex and betrall
lost to my family
and my fathers beating hands
all i have left is the cloths on my back
night after night
i sleep with all these men
who only want sex and a peck for good luck
slides money between my breast and shows me goodnight
one night was not good at all
for when i found a man he wasn't the one
he saw me with my short looking skirt
looking so sluty
i mine as well be naked
he took me to the hotel room
but this time its was not empty
there were three other men
waiting
and
ready
for me to undress and let them all play
but i did not want too
for the first time i said "NO"
but the men did not like that
they began to push and pull
untill i saw black
and woke up covere in red and white
i was bleeding form head
so i could not stand
i had cum stains on my clothing
even some in my hair
i hated doing what i was doing
so i told my father i was done
doing his bidding
thats when he got
andgry
sad
and
confused
for i have never told him "NO"
he grabbed my by the throut
threw me for a spin
beat me till i cold not stand
climbed on top
and played his own toon
i hated seeing his face all red
i hated seeing him ontop
of me
all
dead
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AmaNdAsHepArD
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2004-04-30 10:20:10]
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Re: HOOKER: part II
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by Thivanka on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:46:25 AM AEST
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What appalling thoughts and, yes, these are things that happens in this wrecked world obssesed with sex and money. You said quite a lot and managed to put the feelings of the poor girl in good. Great write!
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Re: HOOKER: part II
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:40:59 PM AEST
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| I hope this is not a true story for it makes me very sad. No generic comment here. Please tell me atleast that you are O.K. |
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Re: HOOKER: part II
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:48:51 PM AEST
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| Very Good And Keep It Going Girl. I Just Hope This Stuff Isn't True |
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