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Taste of Thought
Contributed by
TheRaven
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:04:44 AM in AEST
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The bridge is there, firm and
Inviting. Just take a step and I
Will meet you halfway. These
Devious thoughts such a burden;
Longing to dump them into the
Murky whirlpool below, and just meet
You halfway for a taste. So sweet
And luscious, you always were a flirt.
Give up that game of hearts and
Come across the slowly fading bridge.
Don’t worry, my love for you will keep
Us afloat. Just trust me, and
I will meet you halfway.
-The Raven
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2004-04-30 10:04:44]
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Re: Taste of Thought
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by Kie on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:20:16 AM AEST
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I enjoyed your poem.
The line that stood out the most for me was this one--"Come across the slowly fading bridge"
That was thought provoking and deep.
As the bridge fades its easy to forget the pathway.
A nice poem to read.
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Re: Taste of Thought
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 06:36:48 PM AEST
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| very good... thanks for sharing. |
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