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past today
Contributed by
theused66677
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:54:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i cant see past today
i cant see my heart
but its still beating
i cant see the trigger
I cant see my finger
but its on the trigger
idunno why i got up today
theres only more mistake i have to make
i made it another day ok
ill make past today
i want to miss you
i cant see you
i cant see today
the radio tells me to die
your lips say goodbye
id cry out in stide
but all i want to do is die
past today
im farther away
the paths not sure
its worn away
in a crazy way
sick and tired
i breathe your pain
until i stop
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2004-04-30 09:54:37]
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Re: past today
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by bleeding_chains on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:11:13 AM AEST
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| this is a great write. this poem rocks. |
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Re: past today
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:49:19 AM AEST
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Wow! Very intense!
"but all i want to do is die past today" Very vivid! Great write! |
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