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MY GARDEN
Contributed by
AliB
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:32:47 AM in AEST
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Now I’ve a fence round my garden
It’s time to think up a design
With rockeries and trees
Lots of flowers for the bees
A little piece of heaven that’s mine
No more people looking in when I’m out here
Being nosy and noisy and irate
Just pure privacy
The kids, dogs and me
Shut the rest of the world out with my gate
Soon I’ll start digging and planting
Mowing, and sowing my seeds
I’ll be trimming and strimming
It’ll do wonders for my slimmimg
When digging up and pulling out all these weeds
There’ll be Peonies, Aquilegia and Chrysanthemums
Dahlias, Lavender and Sweet Peas
Hollyhocks, Tulips and Lupins
Anemones, Lavertera and a few Hebes
So as soon as the sun starts a‘shining
I’ll grab my fork and my spade and my rake
A bit of gravel here
Some fruit trees over there
When I’ve finished it’s gonna look great!
Copyright ©
AliB
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Re: MY GARDEN
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by Hyper on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:39:01 AM AEST
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what a perfect picture... good luck. Nice work.
-hype- |
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Re: MY GARDEN
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:52:37 AM AEST
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Sounds beautifull.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: MY GARDEN
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:35:40 AM AEST
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| SANDY, takes a saw and makes a hole, so she can look into the garden and see you lol........ great write. plant some daisies for me. |
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Re: MY GARDEN
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by bernard on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 07:36:58 AM AEST
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If you keep them all out you will surely miss the praising comments of the lookers on and that would be a pity. Nice poem though top marks
bernard |
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Re: MY GARDEN
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by Baronhawk on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:53:09 AM AEST
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| Well I am somewhat partial to a well tended garden though in practice a I abhor gardening I am the sort who will have to hire gardener it seems. But all in all I do enjoy a pleasent romp in a private garden... so I can appreciate your gardening concerns.....a nice write herein to detail your beautiful gardens may you have many a happy days herein your garden. |
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Re: MY GARDEN
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by bj on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:06:42 AM AEST
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| i bet it will..nice doin's |
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Re: MY GARDEN
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:08:25 AM AEST
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Hi Ali
This is great, I can envision you sunbathing on your deck chair!! Glad you got your fence.
Excellent write
Love Dawny x |
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