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Love
Contributed by
Killer
on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 07:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love is like a mighty river,
Tumbling over the rocky bed of life,
Moving, slowly and surely.
At times caressing the shoreline,
Like a lover's touch.
All at once, in a raging torrent,
Threatening to burst forth and overflow,
It finds its way.
Gently flowing around the obstacles,
In its path, or in a rush,
Carrying them away.
It has its ups and downs,
Falling, Crashing, Roaring,
But after the turbulence,
It reforms, flowing again,
To continue it's journey.
Meandering this way or that,
Though always steadfast in its goal,
Into the waiting arms of the sea.
Copyright ©
Killer
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2002-10-03 07:15:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 06:01:51 PM AEST (User
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This is so beautifully written ...this took me to the thoughts i had on where i want to be when i pass on from this world..Love does i agree have it's ups and downs but to be put into the sea as you have put it here is absolutely breathtaking....i've never seen the ocean nor been out on the sea...but i want to ....it's a dream of mine i intend on making come true one day....i think you my friend for sharing such beautiful poetry through your heart.....i will be reading more of your poetry ....
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