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Oceans Cry
Contributed by
shanarah
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:28:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Exploding cries come from the oceans voice
intense force, it has no choice
Thousands of years it has been alive
reposed hope on the will to survive
Infamy in this massive water will merge
frantic waves and wild currents diverge
Restricting the life it holds onto below
prevailing their strengths of the undertow
Strenuous efforts, exhausted of the mission
reconstructing behavior of another position
The deluge lays dormant in the endless sea
allowing life to breathe, with a reason to be
Saturating itself of it's great formation
cries are fading, until the next formation
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-04-30 03:28:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Oceans Cry
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 07:05:11 AM AEST (User
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The only thing deeper than the ocean is the meaning embedded in this poem. The words you chose are impressive, the rhymes original and smooth...it's positively spellbinding.
Needless to say, i'll be looking for more of your stuff.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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