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Will Wilt Wonder Walk
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:34:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The smoke is salty against my lips
Filter my thoughts through time
Nothing can take this feeling from me
As miniscule and hopeless, its mine
Feed me through the table
Hold me tighter than you ever will
Acid unto fingertips
And its raining always, even still
The memory of tomorrow
As I sit here and wonder of what could
You shatter me all over
You do exactly what you should
Break into me as a cell of your mind
Crush me between your hands
I will melt into eternity for you
As my will surrenders demands
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Re: Will Wilt Wonder Walk
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:07:13 AM AEST
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ooooooh, this is beautiful, sweet and enchantingly written, i think i just fell into your thoughtflow....... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Will Wilt Wonder Walk
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:40:01 PM AEST
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Purely enchanting. I love it. Such a tangible write. Bravo and encore!
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