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Child Of Mine
Contributed by
HOPE4ME2
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:48:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Where did you go
Child of mine?
Come out of hiding
Allow me to be your voice.
Show your pain...
Tears, toil, and fear.
Where did you go child?
"God is near"
My little one...
You do have a choice
You need no longer,
To hide your pain.
Like the sunshine
After the rain.
It's time to set your
Spirit free.
Through your eyes.
I'll find my journey home.
Where did you go
Child of mine?
Step out in the
Light of day.
For there in the darkness of loneliness,
I feel your unheard sobs,
Find your courage my child...
Courage will ease your way.
Where did you go child of mine?
Allow me to take hold
of your broken wings
And set your spirit free.
HOPE4ME2
Copyright ©
HOPE4ME2
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2004-04-30 00:48:25]
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Re: Child Of Mine
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:10:01 AM AEST
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Well this write moves me more than I've been moved in a very long time. It's so beautifull and sounds heavenly.
Great masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Child Of Mine
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by EvaRee on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:50:09 PM AEST
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| amazingly beautiful...good job! |
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Re: Child Of Mine
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by weswind on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:58:23 AM AEST
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| awesome-- just so true of the inner child in all of us |
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Re: Child Of Mine
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by Archie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:55:33 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem, you have a great heart for seeing a lost world |
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Re: Child Of Mine
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:11:48 AM AEST
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Allow me to take hold
of your broken wings
And set your spirit free
Wow, truely poetic words. Awesome...
Take care.
David |
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